An Invisible Enemy: A Review of “Dying From Dust in the Wind”

The article I analyzed from the Arak Journal was "Dying From Dust in the Wind" by Jaehun (Jason) Jeong. He did a great job arguing his case on pollution in South Korea. He presented the issue, and then went into multiple solutions as to how to fix the pollution. He did very good at presenting the issue in a way that would be understandable for anyone reading it. However, when it came to solutions, he only focused on big picture solutions.

His biggest solutions required China and South Korea collaborating together on an environmental mission. This would include South Korea taking a few of China's methods and using them for themselves. A few of the methods include environmentally friendly cars and creating artificial rain storms to control the dust. A big problem like pollution requires big solutions right? Some of the solutions seemed impossible unless other things were to be done, other smaller solutions. If he expanded on smaller solutions, this paper would gain a lot more.

Overall Jeong did a great job with this paper. All he would need to do to improve is maybe expand on the smaller solutions